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[Tutorial (The Basshunter Song)]

I hate putting stuff here.

Ok, a few things to note. Hi hat on every beat. not so good. change that. reverb the clap a little. the melody was kinda wrong. fix the notes. and its the 2 step style melody. but you put that over the standard 4/4 bassline. so fix that. Um, i guess thats it. After that you should be golden.

MorbidShock responds:

Thanks if i ever get around to doing this song again, I'll keep all this in mind lol

[Skeet n Drip All O'er Dat Ho]

OMG

1 thing to say.

5/5

dj-skeetskeet-69 responds:

thanks bitch ass hoe

[-Titanic -]

awd

Gtsis hwas good., bvut you use that one sampel to much that oobms~.

Pyroific responds:

ha i know

[-Take a look Remix-]

This was pretty good.

The biggest problem is that this isnt Take A Look. Its Hardcore Till I Die. But the song itself was pretty good, i can tel youre improving. 5/5

:D

Pyroific responds:

you know what... your right!! lmao i was spending hours trying to figure out the notes to htid and this was it all along lmao. thankx

[Flashlight]

Ha, i dont know what to say.

This too is really good. i wish i could make stuff of this quality, you need to teach me!

loogiesquared responds:

it's secrect....shhhhh

[{dj-N} Cool Random Midi Song]

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yay for midis! and yay for nate! those secret people wouldnt happen to be people that i know would they?

:O

i hope its who im thinkin of.;sadwdddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

dj-Nate responds:

Yes!!! It who you think! WOOO Da-Nate-Beans!11!

[Lion King]

pure

genius

Father-of-Death responds:

FUCK YOU!!!

[DP06- The BassHunter Song [D]]

Sounds good

This mix wasnt bad, but there were some problems. First of all the melody was barely audible through most of the song. second of all, it was kinda crunchy in some parts. so try to work that out. and this is really just my opinion, but when that gabber kick came in, i almost puked. but it was still a pretty good remix. 5'd

DJ-DaVinster responds:

Lol, thanks for the review, I need to mix it better, I know. It's just a demo, though, so the better version will be better.

[-Tronok Remix-]

Good

when it first started i wasnt expecitng a whole lot, the melody synth sounded like a beepy 3xosc. when it finally came to something it sounded good though. maybe a little repetitive in the build up and the mmain body of the tune. also, watch out, dont overuse the freq modulation.

Pyroific responds:

Thanks, but i like the freq ;)

[-Ultimate Bass-]

You've done well.

i know youve been working hard on this and you can tell how youve improved from your previous remixes. dont worry though, there is some stuff to critique. first of all. you go too long with just the bassline in the beginning gets boring and it seems like it wont build to anything. second of all throw in a high hat and reverb the clap to mix things up a bit. thirdly in the melody there seems to be one tiny note that is off, not like its the wrong note, but its held too long, something i dont know. but lastly , when the piano comes in, it sounds like it was meant to be the 3 step part of the song which clashes tempo with the rest of the song. so work on this fixing those things and youll be golden. and add an offbeat bass maybe something i dont know. good job though. 5/5.

:)

Pyroific responds:

thanks for the long review. well although i cant fix any of these since i cant save them but i'll think of them in my next song. thanks!

-Pyro