Its ok.
To start things off, that first snare roll in the beginning was kindve out of place. and too long. and you reused the same snare roll to many times. then like a little bit into the song, you kinda switch to a 3 step kidna thing, and that snare roll is still going, no offense but its really annoying it needs to stop, or im going to kill someone, use it like once, and thats it. Also, wheres the melody? and again, that snare roll needs to die. And dont have the clap on each 4 steps, maybe each 2. Do all those things, and maybe make the kick a little louder. And youve got it.