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i know youve been working hard on this and you can tell how youve improved from your previous remixes. dont worry though, there is some stuff to critique. first of all. you go too long with just the bassline in the beginning gets boring and it seems like it wont build to anything. second of all throw in a high hat and reverb the clap to mix things up a bit. thirdly in the melody there seems to be one tiny note that is off, not like its the wrong note, but its held too long, something i dont know. but lastly , when the piano comes in, it sounds like it was meant to be the 3 step part of the song which clashes tempo with the rest of the song. so work on this fixing those things and youll be golden. and add an offbeat bass maybe something i dont know. good job though. 5/5.
:)
Author's Response:
thanks for the long review. well although i cant fix any of these since i cant save them but i'll think of them in my next song. thanks!
-Pyro
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10/10
5/5
this
is
god.
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good times.
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we be ballin. i told you about the crack dude right? yea i think i did. im going to suck your cock. justfyi. and you need to get on aim. so we can have teh buttsaix.
:)
Author's Response:
Pfft.. That's nothing. You're mom raped my ass with a wooden cooking spoon.
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This is really good. shit lol, i have to go. id review more but i cant. so all i have to say is its good!
Author's Response:
lol thx man for your (short ^^) review!
[GF]
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well this wasnt too bad. wouldve liked some more intstruments and a more interesting melody or whatever in there. but that orgasm noise got annoying, it sounded like a cheap b rate porn movie.
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This was a supa nice trance track, very spacey, chill feeling. But still had a clubby dance feel. Everything was mixed together nicely, nothing felt out of place. Ive been trying to think of something negative or something to critique but i cant think of anything :)
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Thanks mate!
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The composition wsa good ill give you that. It had an orhcestral feel to it. so nice arrangement and all. But the synths and percussion and whatnot were just, bleh. Sounded no0bish, this song could be very good if you used better samples and synths and all of that good stuff.
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i feel no need to review this song. so im going to leave you with this message.
I love penis.
:)
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Really high quality stuff. i can see you put a lot of effort into this. 5'd
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i just wanted to let you know, that this song is awesome, ive had it on repeat for liek 30 minutes tonight. and im bored. you need to get ungrounded!
Author's Response:
i knoez1!! im leik sneeking on teh nowz1!
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